That was VERY cool. For a new author, you are eccellent. You must write more! I liked the style of this. It was very smooth and simple, uncomplicated and like a myth. It definetly read like a myth, especially the end. Keep writing, I'd love to read more of your stuff.
P.S: If you'd care to read my stories, I'd much apreciate it. ^^
Away!
Aceles