These two short poems give me a sense of calm. Even though they are short, it does not take away from the feeling that it bestows apon the reader. They almost have the feel of a longer Haiku.

Well, they'd be better if they didn't have words like "ere" and "nary", which disturb the flow terribly and seem awfully out of place. I'm not altogether sure you're using them properly, either.

Superb descriptions in both...you really bring it all to life!