|Reviews for Homeland of Dreams|
| Amelia Vogner 4/20/04 . chapter 1
Wow, I feel that way, too. This is a lovely poem, and you are an amazing poet. Keep writing this sort of thing; you have real talent.
| Willow Elandria 4/17/04 . chapter 1
Once again, beautiful... I can relate to that feeling of being aware of fragments of dreams, or just feelings inspired by them, but not being able to remember them... perfectly described. The last three lines are very powerful, with wonderful imagery.
"emotion that is in me engraved" is awkward. Otherwise very good.
| Vivian Strong 4/16/04 . chapter 1
oh it's so purty! i've always fathomed the deepness or our subconscious (wow i can't spell) i love all of your poems and ideas behind them, why can't i put into words thoughts like you have! lol! good luck writing more i love your work!
| Juliet Squared 3/16/04 . chapter 1
Lovely. Absolutely lovely. The word choice is really nice.
| Aleonic Relic 3/15/04 . chapter 1
really great poem and really well written. one of the best poems i've read. you are a really good writer.
| a.swans.cry 3/15/04 . chapter 1
very nice job- i must say. i love the first two lines- *applause* oh and thanks for the review.
| WizardOfWinter 3/14/04 . chapter 1
I absolutely love it! The last line reminded me of my poem "Fly to Your Dreams." I think that is what it is called. . . anyway. Great job!
| blindandnumb 3/12/04 . chapter 1
Wow... that last line is amazing... I sent this to all my friends and said I wished I could write the way you do!
Thanks for reviewing my poem.
| EndlessLove4u 3/12/04 . chapter 1
I like it J...nice poem!
| katylar 3/12/04 . chapter 1
It's very deep. And i like the last line. Well done.
| Seeker of the Way 3/10/04 . chapter 1
| devil's death angel 3/9/04 . chapter 1
wow..u did a great job on this poem. u should write another like this..wen u feel more inspired...great poem...i love the description aswell.
| wisefellow 3/9/04 . chapter 1
| Hindsight 3/9/04 . chapter 1
First of all, thank you very much for the kind review ...it was greatly appreciated!
Now, on to the reason I'm here *g* My favorite part of this poem is definitely the last three lines-beautiful concept there, especially in that very last line. Two thumbs up on a well-written poem