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| True.Randomness 2008-02-07 ch 13, | abuseFor your first story it was fairly good. Not only that but your characters were extreamly alive wich made up for everything that was lacking in the story. It was really fun reading it. |
| tsubaki-dono 2007-12-02 ch 13, | abuseI had to read this straight through, it was so cute. Funny characters, great one-liners (very good humour), and interseting plots. Easy reading and no left-field coming lemons. Mostly enjoyed the crrackness of it --always a pleasure to read when done well and this was done very well. Some strangeness in the multiple-PVs but otherwise well written. I like how you so easily use the storyflow to write in the characters' thoughts. I particularly dislike italicised thought-speech... never a good thing. The story flowed well to me, all in all. The only road bumps I encountered were the perspective changes but even that can be overlooked. All in all, really was an impressive read. Can't wait to get some time to read your other work! |
| sweetz123 2007-06-24 ch 9, | abuseoh wow dude, i almost ** myself reading this. I think Ive read it over fully about 4 times, and occaisonally i read a part when i need to crack myself up. Hilarious (and lots of other positive adjectives) |
| WILLfreakinYUM 2007-06-19 ch 13, | abuseThis...is the most awesomest story ever and I absolutely love it and it is so sexy even though there really isn't that much sex or kissing or anything. I love it. Aweosome writer. Lovely. |
| dreamerdoll 2007-06-02 ch 8, | abuseOh, my Gosh, that's MY last name! Michel, that is. Pronounced "mikel," of course! *total excitement* It's so very rare for me to meet people with the same last name as I, especially PRONOUINCED properly! Oh, yeah, and just so you know, the spelling is of course French, but generally it is pronounced "me-shell"...and I doubt you even care, as you've been done with this story for over two years. I just felt like sharijg my total excitement! Anyway, awesome job! |
| pinkphink 2007-04-03 ch 13, | abusewow. i REALLY liked this. like, enough to actually go make an account just to tell you how much i liked it..AND YOU. hehe, now I sound stalker creepy...YAY. ehem, anywho, this was very good, etc. really, i liked the changing view points, the not overly angsty drama while it still having plot-nes...oh, and i loved the charactors. very much. all of them...except for various bad guys, oh and the sister. she's just kinda there for me...i'm sure she's cool and all, but she just kinda jumped in at the end, but she got together with damien, so it's all good. yep, definitly rambling now...well then. i suppose i'll end my blathering and go see if you've written a sequel... |
| TeodoraKagome 2007-02-08 ch 13, | abuseJust finished this story and it's really great. Corie is a super character and very funny and very cool. There were some scenes that got me rolling on the floor with laughter. Although the end seemed a bit rushed and Kris's past, still the story is really good. Great job! |
| Amorelle 2006-06-18 ch 13, | abuseI love this story! They're all so squee!I have a few questions although they may not get answered.1. In the epilogue you make it sound as if Corie doesn't have tattoos but in the prolouge you said that he had two.2. You also said in the beginning that Malc was the same grade as them but had skipped to grades, but in the epilouge you say that he has another year left. I know I shouldn't over think it, but it's just one of my many quirks that bug the heck out of people haha Anyway I still love this story. It makes you all warm and fuzzy inside.Love,~D~ |
| Meio 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abuseI'd looked forever for this story! And now I found it! ^.^ *cheer* |
| HelenofPylos 2006-03-20 ch 7, | abuseI think I actually broke a couple ribs I laughed so hard. This has got to be one of the funniest (ahem *most funny*) stories I have read yet! It's awesometastic! |
| Prisoner-11 2006-02-11 ch 13, | abuseHilarious. Fasination. Full of Glares from You Know Where. Thank you! |
| Zeva 2005-08-22 ch 13, | abuseDude, I seriously don't think I've ever laughed more in one sitting than I did when I read this. So funny! I love Corie's randomness...He actually sounds a lot like me. 0.0 scary...Anyway, terrific job. I really enjoyed it. You wait though, I'll be back sometime to read it again...and I'll leave you another review...Cuz I'm just nice like that. Well, byebyes for now!~Hali |
| Caramel Wind 2005-07-18 ch 8, | abuse..Okay, I'm gonna take it as a compliment when you say us Canadians are evil. Which I will proceed not to understand because usually we're A) too frozen or B) melting because it's some damn hot to do war. Anyhoo, God must have given us the broken AC. Damnit. Your story is really great. ...It's called Koala's Bite. Koalas are cute. I wanna eat them. I totally understand Corie and his habit of nicknaming people. That's a good habit. One of my friends is called Splenda. I'd rant on and on about how much this is funny, but I still have to finish reading it and... I'm kinda sticking to my chair. |
| kalmia raphael 2005-07-04 ch 13, | abuseoh no it ended ;_; i don't know why but i loved this story immensely. corie freaking rules. his voice and all. loved how kris seemed so quiet etc at the beginning and turned out to be... quite hyper =D it's great how you can combine the angst and the humour so well... i caught myself laughing out loud tons of times ^^;; only complaints are that while the floor thing was funny, it got less funny as time wore on =S and the ending was sort of abrupt =( any chance for a sequel soon...? |
| pneumothorax 2005-07-04 ch 13, anon. | abusep.s. I want a picture! :p |