I love the word "tickling"... wonderful... keep writing...

great haiku. makes me think about some things i havnt thought about in a long time... but you might want to take the authers note out of there. If you turn it into a collection of haikus then you should have an authers note but otherwise you should take it out

Very touching. Keep writing!

The poem was good, but about the Author Note. It sounded a little counselly, and yeah...

~~Franken~~