I double-doggy-dare ye to write something completely free of couplets!

Great poem and yet quite powerful it displays your inner straight. Keep up the good work.

hey, he could have been lieing so...
p.s.-i know that i can't spell

the rhyme scheme in this works very well, not a single awkward moment. the juxtaposition of voice is quite nice; it adds a layer of depth to the poem that certainly wouldn't exist if you just had the non-italicized part of the poem in existence.
mezzie
p.s. must say, your reviews are greatly appreciated, they give me much to smile about.

I especally like the italic part...It gives the poem its attitude.

awesome... i can relate a lot... reminds my of my ex i love how it goes from you to her

hey this is kool. i agree with it's message. you shouldn't change for someone elses pleasure...unless it's a good change...in other words an improvement in your eyes too like not being as violent or something. very nice.

This is so good! Your ending is perfect - it wraps it all up perfectly. Great job. ~V~

this poem is very good. Shows that the person is very strong indeed. Cause sayin goodbye isn't easy.

good. very nice "i'm over you" poem.
~Tigress Moon

Aww, this is a really sweet poem. I like it, it shows a lot of courage.

that is so sad... :( a good poem...but so sad..its been that way since i met you and now its...gone...

rhyme is good for this poem, it would note have worked without it. I love the layout, really takes you deeper into what you are reading. Good choice of words, so there is place for swell in the english language after all! overall good message and nice depth. It touches on a not so nice subject yet you feel the right descisions have been made by the people involved, even if they are not reconised right away.
Good luck with the rest of your work
nine iron