wow. this story is getting intense. I can't wait to read the next one! I found you through your Deviantart account. I really love your story Forsaken.

yo! it's "nasake" from DA... actually I guess I'm better known as RENO... haha. I just now noticed that you had fictionpress stuff up, so I went and checked out your only story, which I noticed is kinda old. I'm gonna read the rest of it, but probably not tonight.

But I better actually review the story then, heh heh. I like it, a lot. Don't have much to say about it yet, as it's only chapter one, but I like what I see so far. See ya' 'round.

This story is great! A cute submissive guy locked in a mental hospital and his strong protecting doctor *drool* The oracle kid seems pretty evil to me though and I don't like the way he seems to be messing up the two's relationship. Cadence and Adrian forever!

OMG! I love it! . I cant wait for an update!

Update this story and Forsaken NOW! BLEARGH! *spontaneously combusts*...please? _

I like this story so far. I think we all have a clinically insane character at some point in time...I know I do, , you're awesome at conveying emotions. great job!

i like it! wow, thats a helluva lot of forshadowing. i cant wait to read the rest of it! i really want to see hoe adrian's and cadence's relationship grows! great job!

*shrieks with glee* Sorry, that's all I can really think of saying...lol

This is a great story, I can't wait to read the next chapter. It's really getting to be quite mysterious, and I'm really anxious to see stuff get revealed. Great job with this story, and I'll be back to read the next chapter! :)

Wai!

So sorry for the late review! T_T

I've finished reading this like more than a week ago!

I love Cadence! He's so cute! *eherm*

Anyways, this is a very very nice chapter... but what's with the title... Oracle again XX *sweatdrops*

I like Delaney... And, i'm starting to like Adrian too... *didn't like hiim that much before* X3 But there are still parts about him that is still bugging me...

Eternal - very intruiging...

*camps and waits for next chappie*

Okay, this review is severely late but university has severely eaten my last few months ; I also did swing by before but the formatting was weird :p Sorry about that – you know I’d never miss an update on purpose! And now that I’ve read this chapter, I really really want to read the next chapter – the mystery is driving me mad lol Cadence as a character is appealing more and more to me as the story progresses, as is Adrian and his lovely protective nature. I also found the character of Delaney EXTREMELY interesting. I found the idea of him being mute really shocking and original after his long speeches, and the idea that he’s the son of Adrian’s dead sister. Actually, this chapter in itself was hugely suspenseful and mysterious with the three characters being given those strange titles. I also loved the angst between Adrian and Cadence and really hope that Cadence can see past his fears to realise that Adrian just wants to protect him. I was also really intrigued by Adrian’s idea that everything in their lives had been leading up to their meeting, and the fact that Cadence rejected it. I wonder how long Cadence will keep rejecting Adrian. Anyway, yay for the plot development and I hope you update soon. Now I believe there is more for me to review

Wow, I love this, more would be wonderful but the way you have it now it seems like it can stand on it's own. Ya know, you're just one of those writers I truely aspire to be like...like Stephen King...lol

I think it's really very good. You have to get the next bit up soon. And length would be good. This concept is very good and it's a trifle frustrating with only bit by short bit to go on.

o interesting. looking forward to more _

yay! it's up and the formatting works! *looks about furtively, then, realizing no one is watching, does a lil dance*
good chapter, i'm even more intrigued... i can't wait to see what happens next.. DUN DUN DUN! feel the suspense! sorta... kinda... maybe not really... *sighs* i need help. and less caffiene... but anyway, i really like this story and can't wait to see more of it. i am thrilled/enthralled by your storywriting prowess... _;;
update quickly, eh? i await the next update hovering on the edge of my chair, occasionally losing my balance and falling face first into my desk...