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Suspence, and it was great too.

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Interesting characters you have created. PrelJne seems pretty cool, and crafted up nicely.

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I thought this sounded nice so far. Interesting. Keep it up.

was preljine executed then?

Aye. I take it that Preljne is dead as well (sorry, I am slow). A sad way to end it, a very powerful ending at that. At least you didnt fall for cliche.
If you are starting any stories soon, please tell me. I am updating A Sorcerer of Selen soon, so you can tell me in the review.
MidnightSorceress

I really do hope that you wont kill her character off, but, its your story, and it goes as you choose.
Anyways, two exceelent chapters, Please update shortly.
MidnightSorceress

Short chapter, so not much to say. Very good though. Update soon!

Another good chapter. I like ho preljna is playing along with th plan, evn though they are ripping her off. Once again, I like how you hav portrayed characrers feelings in this story. Update soon!
MidnightSorceress

I should have said this earlier, but I really feel sorry of Preljne. I would think a ruler would have more control, even if she was a woman.
I like the romance going on between Leasur and Preljne. I know it was to be expected "of love and war", and I like the way your portrayed it so that it isnt sappy.
Excellent Chapter. Update soon.
-MidnightSorceress

It seems to me like Preljne and Leasur have both lost control.
Another excellent chapter. I am going to try and read the next one righ now if I can.

Love it! Love it! Love it! Keep writing. Oh... I'm so pissed at those stupid advisors and I used to like Zortin but now I think he's an ass. Why is it that all the leaders... in this story and in real life... think that you always have to have a war to get what you want. Nobody ever thinks of peace!

What? no more chapters? u must continue remind me to check up when u do, okey? i'm veri forgetful update soon!
Never the same

War! yay! Excitment _

oh i don't like the sound of that O?o

Love is in the air or so i think O.o