Hmm...interesting. What war were you talking about? Just out of curiousity...

It actually sounded pretty cool, I just didn't like the style it was written in...The whole repeating yourself about their not wanting to carry the torch. Granted, that was the point, to get that point solidly in your mind...

Just thought I'd let you know that...heh...don't kill Aidan...~*continues stalking*~

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Wow... I really really like it alot. It's very beautifully written. Heart touching, really. Keep up the nice work.