You're good at rhyming. So you do poetry huh?

Wow...not many on this site have your type of talent. Sure, screaming dark evil teenage lyrics are fine...but I prefer your style much better. Your poem stikes me as peacful, not sad. Hey, they got to die togther! The rhyming is spot on, and for once I get to read a poem that is neither too long nor too short. Thank you for sharing this work with the world! ^^

My favortie part is the bittersweet ending. I really wish I had such a gift for poetry, though Scarlett seems to have developed that area better than I. Have you attempted to send your poems in and get them published? Also, thank you for the review and in answer to you question: I have no idea. There will be things that happen that verge on it, however.

Wonderful albeit morbid imagery.

I have your attention? Well, you also have mine. I really like your writing.katy

Oh...it's so...melancholy...and yet peaceful sor some reason...and yet not. I love your rhyme scheme.

"The watched the insects through their hands" did you mean they? Just bringing that to your attention. It's a very pretty poem, by the way.

Oh wow...I don't even know how to go about saying how wonderfully written that was...GREAT JOB!

My goodness. I've never been one for poetry, but I was meandering around and ended up here, and I'm so glad I did! I'm pretty much flabbergasted- I never thought I'd like a poem found on this site so much.. but the strength of your descriptions, along with the diction choices and beautiful imagery stunned me. I've read it three times over now, and each time I admire it even more... it makes me wish I wasn't such a turd at writing poems.

Simply put, it's lovely. Death has always frightened me, as I'm sure it does nearly everyone, but 'Fixed bodies' has left me with a sense of more peaceful acceptance.. if that makes sense, of course.

Anyway, I ought to stop yammering at you, and just say I'm in awe over this poem. Completely baffled. I don't know how you concocted this wonderful piece.

Alright, til next time, then!

-Inky

that was really deep and i love the wording. it was different from what i usually read, but i really loved it.

Wow! This poem is incredible! I love it. The rhyme scheme, the description; I read it so fast I felt like I took it for granted, you must have spent a bit of time working on that to make it work so f'ing well. Great Job! Cheers!

I love it.

Ah...what a nice poem. Reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe (don't know why) and I think it is very interesting. Never could write poetry myself, but I like reading it.

Wow... the way you wrote it and the words you chose made this poem so great. I love it ^-^

Wow, that is one of the most descriptive poems I've ever read. You did a wonderful job and I hope to read more soon. You have a beautiful writing style, put it to great use.

Morbid Maxwell

Wow! That was really good. I liked the visuals you use. Awesome!