wow that was a great poem. im touched

WOW! i love it it's so deep and meaningful. If u want pleez R&R my stuff I have sum poems I don't know if they're good or not because I'm more of a story writer. They're called Beth's Feelings of badness and they're about feelings of badness [how original is the title lol] Anyway I could do wit some tips cos ur poem is so good!

Very deftly written. Every line so well chosen and with a powerful message to consider.
Well Done
KEEP WRITING!!
F.C