I LOVE the story Angie! I think it's wonderful!

That's pretty original - having a demon obsessed with beauty trapped in a bell. Hidraya is a nice choice for a demon's name.

hi, i love your stories, so would you continue to write it? i believe you are very busy because you haven't update for about 1 month already. sorry for bothering you!!

Your descriptions can be a bit awkward and the style is a little redundant at times. On the whole this is a good story though. I normaly don't read anything containing magic/supernatural. It would be nice to learn more about Hidraya soon. Did you get her name from the Hydra? You've overdone the Tina being ditzy/oblivious to others by a bit. Once again, good work.
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