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| Funsmoke 2004-03-11 ch 1, | abuseInteresting imagery...I especially like the last 11 lines. |
| The Un-great-ful 2004-03-11 ch 3, | abusei really ** like the idea of soaking up knots with my brain, its so novel; you can almost feel them being sucked through some porous membrane and into your soul. snakes, spiders and spokes, i hope you meant spokes and not spooks otherwise you're not as ridiculous as i first thought. I don't think people are meant to know how it works Alan |