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| Blackening the Ivy 2004-06-22 ch 1,   | LUV it. fave line "Cold as Satan's sympathy..." |
| happy-go-lucky 2004-04-11 ch 1, | your really good...i'm not so great at writing haiku's... ^+^ muhahha (happy was here) |
| twilightwriter07 2004-04-05 ch 1, | Nice descriptions here...never thought of that way before. ^_~ |
| swirlygirl 2004-03-27 ch 1, | all your poems are quite nice keep writing!! |
| RingWraith14 2004-03-20 ch 1, | short but sweet... I loved it keep writing... |
| A Beautiful Nightmare 2004-03-14 ch 1, | I love the night... It gives me the feeling of being free... wonderful haiku... |
| TasteofRevenge 2004-03-13 ch 1, | I'm not that into haikus, but this one seems well written. If we do all die, we should all take our revenge! Sweet Revenge! *evil laugh* |
| AnnaSun 2004-03-12 ch 1, | Hi, Good haiku. Please read and review my poems. Thanks for sharing :) |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-03-12 ch 1, | Hello- Well for your first attempt, you did a great job. I like the first line " Whispering darkness", very eerie, and good. Nice job! Whispers In Silence |
| Tempest Breeze 2004-03-11 ch 1, | pretty good. |
| Franken 2004-03-11 ch 1, | Kinda freaky... I like the analogy that you put in, I thought that was pretty good. Maybe just a tad bit more on the descriptive words side, but that's about it. Awesome job. ~~Franken~~ |