Wow...i really love this! And i understand the whole "hit me at once" thing - that happened to me too with a lot of songs i wrote, you just seem to think of it all at once! *grins* As i read this i could sort of imagine the music for it in my head which really made me like it even more! Great job, keep writing!
luv ~micky~ xx

damn you for being so damn lucky that you get to feel that way. but at least you let the rest of us in on it a little. i guess i should be thanking you for letting me know how it feels to love someone again, but it's kind of depressing for those of us who cant really feel that emotion anymore, for various reasons. either way, it gets feelings going and that's what your writing has always done- what's poetry is always supposed to do. and it's amazing as usual.

I really like it! When I was reading I just heard the song playing in my head, music and all, and it sounded beautiful.

that was so sweet and well written!! i really, really like it!! ^^ oh! very nice!! :3