Poor, POOR Jeffrey.

This has a few typos. Needs to be spellchecked.
Other than that- I love this!
Oh my god, so sick. I wouldn't know what I'd choose either. This is a great short story. It makes me think, feel, react. I want to write like this eventually.
Great job.

Holy **.. lol that was an amazing story. Only thing though, "God" and his dialogue, makes him sound like an arrogant bastard lol but it was interesting how you described what he looked like. I think you should have ended it so that Jeffrey went to "hell" and hell would be the complete opposite of heaven. Depressing ending but still good. Lots of graphic parts, quite an imagination you have. One of the best athiest stories I've read. Keep up your writing!
Jenna xx

Pretty good... A bit like something I wrote, it's called Heaven... check it out ^_^