hey! That's very good! I usually can't read poetry that doesn't ryhme, but that was very good..very sad, but very good. Love it. :o).

this is one of your best works! it's so pretty and flows wonderfully! *claps* good job!
|Rikku|

The seemed kind of overused, but that may just be because I don't like that word. Good job overall.

Love it, good job.