Well SOMEONE has a thing for Malice Mizer

Yeah, the Seven Saints really are reminiscent of the Jupongatana, if only in concept. 'Cept they were all female. Anyways, good work, man, as always. keep it up, and remember what I said about takin it easy. Nice and slow, gives more time for character development (and helps explain things in the action. plus, if you develop the characters, you can make the action more intricate and interesting, i.e. an overcomeing personal limits bit, or summat like that.), plus u can say it's longer XP.
The Jewel-Encrusted,
Vladimir

you did try, but i'm afraid i must just be quite stupid because i'm still confused! still, good story, i look forward to reading more

no confusion there..damn cliffhanger though. good job, keep goin chuy, this story has a lot of potential!

Wow...you're right it is pretty confusing...but i somehow get it...if that makes sense. lol
oh and btw...it's rose bush

O, building suspense with the, "they're coming," eh? nice, very nice. Righteous, ,or self-righteous character? anyways, nice use offlowers, for symbolism, even tho u explain it ;; Keep it up dude.

Wow this story is awesome! It's a little confusing but it's still really good. Is the second chapter the last one? I hope it's not because this story is so good and I want to read more of it. Oh btw I saw your reviews for Lukechu's story *cough* lol

Hmm...it's kewl...pretty good...i don't really know what to say. Uh...very dark...quite typically. Keep writing, this story has potential.

This is deep man, its a good book. I admit, it was a bit hard to follow, but i got it! and dont mind me, im just dumb . good story so far!

Sounds good so far my rosey friend! this is gonna be a great story, so keep bringing the vamp story goodness for our viewing pleasure! err...oh yeah, please keep bringin the vamp goodness ; this one will be a good one

So INTERESTING. *composes herself* This story is already extremely interesting, I would love it if you would continue.

Excellent start! I am eager to read more. This doesn't seem to be the run of the mill vampire story.