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| Christina Prince 2004-11-28 ch 1,  | abuseWell SOMEONE has a thing for Malice Mizer |
| Vladimir 2004-08-05 ch 5, anon. | abuseYeah, the Seven Saints really are reminiscent of the Jupongatana, if only in concept. 'Cept they were all female. Anyways, good work, man, as always. keep it up, and remember what I said about takin it easy. Nice and slow, gives more time for character development (and helps explain things in the action. plus, if you develop the characters, you can make the action more intricate and interesting, i.e. an overcomeing personal limits bit, or summat like that.), plus u can say it's longer XP. The Jewel-Encrusted, Vladimir |
| by-the-light-of-the-moon 2004-05-18 ch 4, | abuseyou did try, but i'm afraid i must just be quite stupid because i'm still confused! still, good story, i look forward to reading more |
| Aexicas Ryinn 2004-04-04 ch 3, | abuseno confusion there..damn cliffhanger though. good job, keep goin chuy, this story has a lot of potential! |
| Sage 2004-03-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseWow...you're right it is pretty confusing...but i somehow get it...if that makes sense. lol oh and btw...it's rose bush |
| Arekusu Vladimiri 2004-03-23 ch 3, anon. | abuseO, building suspense with the, "they're coming," eh? nice, very nice. Righteous, ,or self-righteous character? anyways, nice use offlowers, for symbolism, even tho u explain it ^^;; Keep it up dude. |
| Sage 2004-03-21 ch 2, anon. | abuseWow this story is awesome! It's a little confusing but it's still really good. Is the second chapter the last one?? I hope it's not because this story is so good and I want to read more of it. Oh btw I saw your reviews for Lukechu's story *cough* lol |
| Arekusu Vladimiri 2004-03-18 ch 2, anon. | abuseHmm...it's kewl...pretty good...i don't really know what to say. Uh...very dark...quite typically. Keep writing, this story has potential. |
| Aexicas Ryinn 2004-03-14 ch 2, | abuseThis is deep man, its a good book. I admit, it was a bit hard to follow, but i got it! and dont mind me, im just dumb ^^. good story so far! |
| Aexicas Ryinn 2004-03-13 ch 1, | abuseSounds good so far my rosey friend! this is gonna be a great story, so keep bringing the vamp story goodness for our viewing pleasure! err...oh yeah, please keep bringin the vamp goodness ^^; this one will be a good one |
| WolfDeamon 2004-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo INTERESTING. *composes herself* This story is already extremely interesting, I would love it if you would continue. |
| Benjamin Levin 2004-03-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellent start! I am eager to read more. This doesn't seem to be the run of the mill vampire story. |