 Rowan Arkenson 2004-03-12 . chapter 1!!
Amazing.
In truth, the only reason I looked this up was because I was intrigued by the word count!
But wow - it was just like a stream of endless angst. And I loved it.
In places it did feel like you were just putting things in because they rhymed, rather than rhyming things that you wanted to put in, but this was only in certain spots.
Other than that I loved it, you kept up the anguish and confusion and angst throughout the whole 1038 words, and this is definitely going in my favourites list, of which there is maybe only one or two select poems which I thought were really unique and fantastically written.
Well done. Amazing.
-rowanx |