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| lamentation 2004-03-12 ch 1,  | abuseYay! Another one! Its beautiful, and it flows. I can see your writing is improving. Good job! |
| Predator-98 2004-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI totally LOVED that story! The best yet, Mel..NO DOUT! It was so good and meaningful, I could feel their compassion with eachother..The tense situation, in fact I could feel my heart beat as I read this perfect story!*lol* Wonderful Job, Mel!-Olivia I MUST read it again.::smiles:: |