For some reason, it reminds me of Dr. Seuss. Interesting poem, however.

Black to white... I sense a religious theme. I understand each color represents something, but what? Or am I trying to interpret too much? I feel that one's literature represents what the writer thinks on a usual basis. Anyway, excellent writing. Please keep it up.

I loved it! Very confusing though.

Its odd, but I love the way it flows. You rhimed things well, usually when I hear rhimes I am so annoyed. But it works great with this piece. Keep Writting.