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Broken.Hockey.Stick
2004-03-12
ch 1,
abuseI forgot to say that this poem was written for a class assignment. The lines had to have 8 syllables then 6, then 8 then 6, and so on. And the second and fourth line of each stanza had to rhyme.
Sesquipedalophobic
2004-03-12
ch 1,
abuseI liked that, although you could have used harsher words. Still, it had clever rhymes, which are always appreciated.
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