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Reviews For: She Failed Her Maths Test

Sophie Ulquiorra Allen
2005-11-24
ch 1,
abuseWhat can I say? Aw.
Rusty And The Rubix Horse
2005-10-17
ch 1,
abuseFor the love of god, people NEED to review more on Fictionpress!

Nice job with this poem. The only thing I saw that really bothered me was that the rhyme scheme sort of changed in the 5th, 6th, and 7th stanzas. But I suppose if your intention was free-verse, then it's fine. Anyway, good job!
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