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| Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 2005-11-24 ch 1, | abuseWhat can I say? Aw. |
| Rusty And The Rubix Horse 2005-10-17 ch 1, | abuseFor the love of god, people NEED to review more on Fictionpress! Nice job with this poem. The only thing I saw that really bothered me was that the rhyme scheme sort of changed in the 5th, 6th, and 7th stanzas. But I suppose if your intention was free-verse, then it's fine. Anyway, good job! |