 Twilight Starr 2007-11-03 . chapter 1Words can definitely be very powerful. Good luck with poetry and life. Nice work.
~Twilight Starr~ |
 The System Mother 2005-01-21 . chapter 1Yes'm. That's very true. I agree totally... I still have words from like two years ago... powerful, evil words buzzing around in my head. |
 The Great Charlatan 2004-05-12 . chapter 1Perhaps I shall follow suit with kind words?
I like this one a lot...
You know that good poetry has been created when it is really short, but you still know what the message is...
Well done. |
 A Beautiful Nightmare 2004-03-24 . chapter 1Yes, you are right... short yet deep... I enjoyed this... |
 faery tragedy 2004-03-23 . chapter 1This meager poem had such influence and charm. The rhyming (of especially line three and six) was a nice touch, though not cliche. It's kind of like saying words are double-bladed. We remember the worst of them, and the best of them. Nice work.
*Faery Tragedy |
 Aslan Israel 2004-03-16 . chapter 1Simple, yet says it all. Even if you forgive someone for hateful things they've said, I don't think you ever really forget about it. |
 Schubiegirl 2004-03-15 . chapter 1this was very truthful. I love it. The ryhme scheme is good and even though it is a very short peice, it is also very powerful. good job. |
 Agathy 2004-03-14 . chapter 1I was checking up on your profile to see if you'd uploaded anything new...and the summary for this poem seemed interesting. Nice take on the old "sticks and stones may break my bones but words will never hurt me." This is very truthful and it has a great rhythm to it...for such a short poem, it's quite powerful. =) Anyway, I hope you update I Am Mary soon...and I've updated my story The Journal of Iona Cullioni, so if you've got time, please take a look at the latest chapter...and write more! You have a great talent. |
 Death Goddess Assassin 2004-03-13 . chapter 1This is very true. I never did like the little rhyme "Sticks and stone may break my bones but words will never hurt me blah blah blah" Nobody knows exactly how bad words hurt. |
 imxnotxyourxstar 2004-03-13 . chapter 1Beautiful, I absolutely loved it. Flowed wonderfully and the rhyming worked well. Keep up the good work!
~Lsay312 |