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| Lady of Secrets 2007-12-01 ch 1,   | o. that about sums up passion in a nutshell. god ur good. im serious, i think the less words u write, the better it is. which, in itself, is kinda complicated. |
| miss lavender 2005-04-10 ch 1, | Very nice. I like how there's no capitilization.. Expresses a ton, in just a 3-7-4 haiku. Great. Keep it up!! -La |
| Tiger SilverWing (aka Rowen... 2004-06-12 ch 1, | I will respond with a haiku: beautiful yummy and tasteful with love much enjoyed ^_^ |
| Franken 2004-03-16 ch 1, | Good, good job! I suppose I can't quite relate to it yet, but maybe sometime soon... ~~Franken~~ |
| breakdown in the waiting ro... 2004-03-16 ch 1, | Ohh. . .I have some things going through my head, but I'll keep them to myself. (Damn obsession with necrophiliacs!) Ahem. I adore this piece. A truly fantastic haiku. -Jessica |
| Chaia 2004-03-13 ch 1, | i really like this. it says alot. +fav |