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Reviews For: Scenes From a Traveler's Memory

Franken
2004-03-16
ch 2,
That's not fair. I hardly ever get to go to a summer beach. (Stuck here in stupid Utah) Yeah, the grey here in Utah isn't all that spectacular. Oh, woops, side track my bad. Anyways nice job on this!

~~Franken~~
Franken
2004-03-16
ch 1,
"Raindrop-kissed"
That was a very nice word choice right there. Really love the title of this series too, I can kind of see it going somewhere.

~~Franken~~
teh tarik
2004-03-14
ch 2,
i miss the summer beaches and days, but its all fading to autumn now...beautiful descriptions.
teh tarik
2004-03-14
ch 1,
Oh, beautiful...especially the first line. Keep up the great work.
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