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| Franken 2004-03-16 ch 2, | That's not fair. I hardly ever get to go to a summer beach. (Stuck here in stupid Utah) Yeah, the grey here in Utah isn't all that spectacular. Oh, woops, side track my bad. Anyways nice job on this! ~~Franken~~ |
| Franken 2004-03-16 ch 1, | "Raindrop-kissed" That was a very nice word choice right there. Really love the title of this series too, I can kind of see it going somewhere. ~~Franken~~ |
| teh tarik 2004-03-14 ch 2, | i miss the summer beaches and days, but its all fading to autumn now...beautiful descriptions. |
| teh tarik 2004-03-14 ch 1, | Oh, beautiful...especially the first line. Keep up the great work. |