excellent. i had to read it twice in order to think about it properly but its excellent. It says so much about love, tenderness, soothing, and the aroma of mom's, whther or not u meant it like that. This is why ur on my favorite authors list becuz ur poems make me think; they make me feel. And thats beautiful, if only in my book. may grace b with u.

that's a great deal of emotion put into 11 words ;) haikus are more than good they're GREAT!

very evocative!