this story kick butt (a**)
it is cherrychick040

Hi. This is a really interesting story. I like your style.
Thank you for the review :).

Hey sweet chapter! There were really funny parts here and there but this part got me 'We both know H has been taking pills again.' lol. Can't wait and see your next chapter!

Suggestion: Instead of ending with "We both know H has been taking pills again." you could make it more suspensful, and more of a plot hook if you say "We both know that H has been doing it again."
The intro to the new characters were a little confusing, but otherwise, great chapter! Update soon.
Freedman

ooh! ooh! I want more, i need more! *clawing at you* post again! i want to read the rest of it

AWESOME!! \m/ Sounds like a cool story, please continue and update soon... :P Ok... I'm out!!

Awsome story. I like the whole first letter of each characters name making the story name. Hope you write more to this it's extreamly intersting. One question is Eloise male or female?

This sounds like it could really be going somewhere!
The beginning was a little shaky, and it's a little hard to figure out the characters (well, for me anyways) but besides that, this is great, and update soon!
Freedman