This was so neat! *claps" yAy! Most of my stuff comes to me out of the blue like this, too! So, good job! I like it, It has a nice flow, good imagry, a nice story to it, I like the formating at the end, like gravity pulling the tide out to sea away from the shore, or the moon moving away to let the sun reign, or some damn thing! Glad to see your formatting sticks - mine never does *pouts*

very nice ,, like a childrens story book