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Kelpylion 3/29/04 . chapter 1*blinks* Woah...I didn't know that anyone else had analyzed vanilla that much. simple, but SO BLOODY TRUE! I personify everything, and this is definitely how I would personify vanilla. But if vanilla is not chocolate, is chocolate necessarily the opposite of all the things that vanilla is? Because I'm fond of chocolate as well, and, depending on the chocolate, I don't think I'd describe it as lying or fake. Maybe corrupt, but open about the fact! |
Bitten Caliban 3/15/04 . chapter 1The poem is odd The poem is what you wrote The poem is not ignorance The poem is what you have The poem is what I read The poem is what I comment on The poem is what I like The poem is originality The poem bears no apparent sense The poem is what it is. N'est pas? |
Seeker of the Way 3/14/04 . chapter 1This was interesting. Simple. I think the repetition wore on me, so I think you have done better. But it is very philosophical, which I like! |
Caveman 3/13/04 . chapter 1um, anyone up for choclate? |