You use big words. Not that I'm saying that's a bad thing. But I do need a dictionary if I'm going to understand a couple of those words...how old are you? You sound like an intellectual college student. Anyways, I'm babbling because it's 1am and I should get to reviewing this poem already. Well, with the big words and lovely imagery, this poem rounds out to be...dark. Yes, very dark. I can't say that this is my very favorite...style? of poetry. Not sure if that's exactly what I mean. What I mean is that (this is going to sound mean...) I don't sense...you know, I shouldn't even say this because I don't want to offend you, but the truth is, I've read a good number of poems like this. I'm sorry! But that's the way I feel. Regardless, all of those poems were very good and this one is too. Okay, now that you probably despise me for those comments, I'm going to go check out more of your stuff...=D