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| sonrisa por favor 2005-08-14 ch 1,  | abuseI felt so light reading this. Makes me want to fly |
| little sis 2005-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was a cool poem. I thought it was very good. i like how it rymes.~friend from Calgary~not bigfoot~middle child~ |
| Oath 2004-08-25 ch 1, | abuseI see the poem screaming symbolism. You've gone through your ups and downs in lifes; You've dance amoung stars and had a great time but than you trip and fall or (tumble) but you've always managed to spring back to the dancing. You'll defy sadness because you have the will to be unique and to be youself. |
| Locomotive Breath 2004-07-15 ch 1, | abuseyay for not forcing rhymes! good job |
| Bigfoot111 2004-05-30 ch 1, | abusethat's really good... i could almost feel all of that... you have to keep writing good things like this! |
| zoey7 2004-03-14 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is a beautiful poem. i love it! =) it just gives this mental picture of snowy mountains, and a clear blue sky *sigh* i wish i could fly!! thanks for reviewing my poem! ^_^ |