|Reviews for Stay Away|
| AntiPleasure 3/17/04 . chapter 1
m -nods- nice rhythm with so little words. I'm impressed with the minumal amount of words that you used and created a dark and depressing pictured.
| i was a postcard 3/14/04 . chapter 1
Well this is depressing...as regards to the actual poem, I liked the...how exactly would I say it, the rhythm? I liked the way it...flowed. As to the subject matter...like I said, depressing. Yeah, not much more I can say about that...
| EchoesOfReason 3/14/04 . chapter 1
HOLY SHIT, that was amazing. Are you okay though? This is seriously...wow! I think the best line of it would be
Stand by the ledge
Stand by the sink
Stand on the chair
Stop to think
Just because it's simple and the rhymes are amazing. I love it. This is great, like i said, and I mean it. Take care, great job, and good luck. I hope you're okay!