"Morning glory, the morning after//Open shirt and wind to spare..."
Lovely. Beautifully written, and love the ()'s. So characteristic of you, with silent words and profound sounds. ^^
~ Kit ~

Wow, one of your best poems I think. Interesting use of the brackets through out the whole poem. I think every stanza is written well and it has a very dreamy effect in the poem with lots of pretty summer and romantic images and such. Good use of images.
Jenna x

fascinating, love how it could be a poem with the quotes or with out them, esp like the first stanza too, really set a mood, good flow, nicely done

WOW. I'm truly in awe of this one. So sensual, yet so innocent. Pathos. Applauds to you.
-Cindy Moon *)

that was beautiful- you did a wonderful job with this, i loved it tons! :puts on faves: