HEy there, jsut decided to play on the job and review this story. I really like it, even though I didn't say so last time.

I LIKE HONEY & DRESSES!
but anyway... i really like this piece, but i think you need to think somemore about which words you want to start the lines one. & on line 11-- i think the F "fairies" should be in caps.

okay! \:|

Hiya! I love this story, it's very funny and cute. I'm putting it on my favorites list. bye bye.

Oh my..what utter fabulousness! ^_^ Not only is the content ighly amusing, but your format intigues me. No traditional pattern or rhyme or reason that I can owrk out (but that's not saying much.. ^_~) but it still works perfectly. Hurray for you!

This was extremely cute and amusing. Well done.

That was so cute! Flitsy flitsy flitsy... what a great word. Gave me the giggles. ^_^
(My alter ego likeses it too!)

how silly. hehehe

ah, it is a poem. :) i laughed. :)