Breath-taking.

Brilliant.

The choice of languistic style perfectly complements the story.

In the last chapter, I felt like I myself had sprouted golden wings... Thank you for writing this!

Hello ... nice to meet you ... I read this poem and a little bit of Cassandra's story, you have the prose touch, something I lack, my stories are heavy because of my philosophy ... congrats on your poem ... I love mythology, in particular viking and celtic mythology ... good job
Keltica, the celtic fire from within

This is pretty good, though not your best. Most are the problems are in lines where you miss the meter (it's in iambic pentameter, right?), and some where a few word changes would make the sentences less awkward. I don't like your choice to use Elizabethan English ("saith", "must needs"), but I'll leave that alone, since you consciously chose to use it.
Some of the enjambment is just fantastic.

I adore it. Sorry I didn't review earlier! :)
I love how when there are linebreaks and you capitalise the first letter of each line, it seems as though if it were just flowing prose, it would be very interesting and symbolic to read it with those capitals still in place. Very cool.
~Swinging from the chandeliers~

::bounces:: So! Evil! Precious!
I continue to heart this poem and its descriptions. He jumps through a thousand possibile tactics...so evil. ::scowls::

::spits at Asmodeus::
Lowly little worm. Go crawling on back to Death now, puny snake.
'What have you?' ::rolls eyes:: He's a jealous bugger, isn't he?
I love this, dear. But kick his ** soon. I'm all for dramatics, but I like my Satan beaten solidly into the ground. ^^

::folds her paws primly and looks up at Asp-man:: And what haven't you? ::quirks ear to listen:: Aha.
And may I remind you that there is one Sword, and you are not holding it?
Really, he's just getting annoying. After centuries, he's thought of nothing new to say.
I can't wait to see him get what's coming to him.

::grabs flamethrower::
Bastard! Get the hell away from my friend!
::WHOM!::
I love this, dear. Though the similarity part is...creepy. Very, very creepy.
Meg told me the best way to taunt him is thus: in a singsong, highly triumphant voice, thou shalt sing out, "He was kicked out!" And lo, Satan shall be mightily ticked, and cry like a baby. ^.^
Beautiful and powerful, and very strengthening as well. Can't wait to read the next installment.

I wantwantwantwant to see more of this.
O.O
::squeaks!:: Is him, precious, him!
::beats him sharply with an umbrella:: Stay away from the precious, nasty man!
~Randomly Yours
Meg

What is worng with my poems? they are fine. Capitalisation gives enphasism. Putting words in columns gives body. It is a Poetry Element Called Catalog. I would wish that you would learn about poetry before you critise my work. If you want to see my better poems, then take the time to read them, they are there fro you to read.

Ah, the pairing of these particular combatants makes sense now. (Didn't they before? No, not really.) Epic battles make me think utterly symbolic balance, but this . . . this is something else. This is divine irony, of which They are so fond. Like pitting Sarah against Andromeda for similar reasons.
Chaotic Good versus Lawful Evil. Yes.

That was . . . that was *wow*. It's hard to describe it any more than that.
Amazing, as always. :)
~Swinging from the chandeliers~

I'm just gonna have a stunned *sweet mother of *** and curl up in your lap and stay there. ::snuggles::
That was...I don't know, I can't even put it in words. That peirced. The whole time I felt like something cold was around my heart and I was actually shaking as I read it, and my eyes felt odd. Every description was perfect, perfect.
I love this. Unadulterated love.
And the same and more of a different, brighter shade for you.

That was completely amazing! I'm really speechless, it was very breathtaking.
Wow.

because you said that, I must ask, what's the good reason for using thou and its declinative forms? I'm not trying to be annoying...just born that way. Also, whats the difference between different types of poetry? If you don't write it in an a/n, could you please email me? If so, thanks, if not, I'll go bug someone else