 Kaylee Sabrina Green 2005-01-19 . chapter 1Doesn't that seem to happen so much? it becomes ironic fate does with its wicked sense of hummor. love it silk and lace |
 Sang Yu Nung 2004-08-08 . chapter 1I like the idea of the "I stare at the stars, layin' in wonder, saying where are you now?" The whole destiny thing, and it's almost like "why wasn't it meant to be?" or "Why isn't it like that now?" It reminds me of the "ALl my life" by K-ci and Jojo and also "Where are you now" by britney spears except for the fact that ur poem is about not letting go and hers is. awesome, *write on*! |
 Steel Winged Angel 2004-04-20 . chapter 1aw. So touching and sad. Can you sign the cd when it comes out? ;) Like how it touches on how much it hurts to lose your true love. Beautiful. |
 Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-04-17 . chapter 1that is so damn sweet! |
 Ima-Wasteland 2004-04-12 . chapter 1you always do such wounderful work... so far ive loved all of it. theres nothing to fix and nothing to post negative comments about.. i love everything you have done |
 KaseyLovesNoOne 2004-04-04 . chapter 1How deep... It's cute and at the same time displays sadness and pain... I like that. Great work once again! |
 rockrockrock 2004-03-27 . chapter 1Nice. |
 pale doll 2004-03-18 . chapter 1This is really good! I'm starting to feel like a groupie when I review your stuff, lol, but I really like it! Keep writing! |
 Ente 2004-03-15 . chapter 1hola paco
hey great song once again! i like topsy-turvy. thats such a great phrase. it reminds me of the hunchback of notre dom. *breaks into song* TOPSY TURVY DAY! um...anyway i really liked the verse saying you want another dream. ^__^ again, nice song. can't wait to read more! byez! |
 Trinka 2004-03-15 . chapter 1Again, like always, wonderful song. I really like your stuff, your such a talented songwriter!
Luv always,
Debbie |