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Reviews For: Dead bodies everywhere

Silentwriter9
2004-07-23
ch 1,
o this is really good. i like it alot. you have one spelling error. i like how you made the poem come "full circle" with repeating the first stanza backwards. it is awesome that you cane rhyme so well and have it flow so nicely... i cant do that:oD. if you liked "Losing Golden Whispers" try "Master" or for something with a little more edge you would like "I am Dracula". tell me what you think!
-LJ-
Thank you for the review
oynxdreams
2004-04-12
ch 1,
Somebody told me I only write happy poems so I must be a happy person, but that isn't true.In reality I'm slightly depressed.However this poem makes me look at myself differently.I have to say I love the rhymes and the descriptions..everything!I'm still working my way through your poems and I promise to review every one!
marabelle
2004-04-08
ch 1,
i love the 1st and 3rd stanzas the most "dress in shadows, bathe in blood" how refreshing!
sarah wild.
DarkPharaoh1666
2004-03-15
ch 1,
sweet. well done.
torturedmind
2004-03-15
ch 1,
you should be a writer youre so depressing!
its really good for depressing people...
hey but i love it neway
luv ya
ZO
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