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| Silentwriter9 2004-07-23 ch 1, | o this is really good. i like it alot. you have one spelling error. i like how you made the poem come "full circle" with repeating the first stanza backwards. it is awesome that you cane rhyme so well and have it flow so nicely... i cant do that:oD. if you liked "Losing Golden Whispers" try "Master" or for something with a little more edge you would like "I am Dracula". tell me what you think! -LJ- Thank you for the review |
| oynxdreams 2004-04-12 ch 1, | Somebody told me I only write happy poems so I must be a happy person, but that isn't true.In reality I'm slightly depressed.However this poem makes me look at myself differently.I have to say I love the rhymes and the descriptions..everything!I'm still working my way through your poems and I promise to review every one! |
| marabelle 2004-04-08 ch 1, | i love the 1st and 3rd stanzas the most "dress in shadows, bathe in blood" how refreshing! sarah wild. |
| DarkPharaoh1666 2004-03-15 ch 1, | sweet. well done. |
| torturedmind 2004-03-15 ch 1, | you should be a writer youre so depressing! its really good for depressing people... hey but i love it neway luv ya ZO x |