Yeh, my dear Sally, anything is possible, and it was for you too.

More positive ending, thank god. Nice piece.

Well, almost completely faithful anyway. I like the way she gradually breaks down.

Wow. That was really good. If that's just the prologue, I can't wait till you update this! Hope the writer's juice starts flowing...Blessed be,Lily

Aw, I think I'm going to cry. I love it! And I kinda wish you wouldn't make it a one shot because I think it'd be really cool to read about Sally and David. I finished your other one and I loved it. In fact I love all your writing, you have a talent that I love coming back to read. Continue please!

wow excellent story! you develpoed depth to the characters and didn't mess the time setting which can be difficult for some.

Even though this is a short story, it really sheds a lot of light on Sally's character. Plus, we get to see how David's and her relationship began, which I was kind of curious about before. And we actually got to meet David, too. I'd have to say he's a pretty good guy.

hoorah! Good chapter! Update Four sisters soon though. . . but i love the prequal. Explains alot! Well update soon!
liriel

Just thought I'd let you know of a consistency thing. This story is about Sally, right? Well, toward the end, it changes to Amy. Just thought I'd let you know :-)