good. alittle rushed, but I like the story. If you wanted to, you could turn this into a really good novel or something. lol. Thanks for the review!

so short... i want more...!!

^_~Fun! (Poor Cas though)

o, very nice, even though it was a little predictable it still kept you interested, and good descriptions- just enough to picture things but not an info-dump.

Is there anything you cant do, Justin? Another fine example of your talent. Reminded me a lot of 'Interview with a Vampire', but thats a good thing. I love the way you decsribed everything, you feel involved somehow!
Thanks again for thrilling me with this, and thanks again for the review !!
mwah

well kool story, it could have used a lil romance or drama with eric and madison but hay what ever, i'm just a drama/romance freak lol but good story i'll have to see what other ones ya got, ttfn!

Actually Vampire Hunter D Bloodlust is better than the original... anyway a very good story...

This would be great as a full length story. Less feeding, more descriptions, draw it out. It would be great. In the form it's in, it's about average. I would suggest more descriptive words and more descriptions of the people and places. As I've said, it would do better in different form.
happy hunting
~Midnight Predator~

Brilliant. Great story line, and I like the pacing of it. Constant, you know? Good characters. Quite predictable though, almost sounds like a movie I've seen before, and the flash back was very "forever knight"

The deja vu of Maria and Madison was interesting. A fun idea actually.
You definitely captured the personality of a modern, gritty, city vampire well.
Though it seems you do not plan to write more onto this piece I think that this would make an excellent prologue to a bigger adventure/trial between Eric and Madison. Just my opinion though.

Wow. very descriptive! ^_^ I love vampires--they're so cool. Good characterization and personalities--Very straightforward, too. Lots of cursing though O_o;;. Oh well.
Thanks for reviewing my story!
--Elvish-Oracle

This was a pretty powerful story. I liked the modern take vampires. It was a more violent story than I usually like to read, but I thought the blood-play and stuff was done really well. Thanks for reviewing my story btw!

Yay this is great. It was sad when Cassandra died tho. I like the different perspective (if that's spelt right!) Plz R&R my Nyte Shys:losing the click