|Reviews for walk away|
| l057 1n51d3 1/8/05 . chapter 1
Very deep. I enjoyed the way you started it.
| The Peculiar One 6/25/04 . chapter 1
*gasp* My gosh, what a wonderful poem. The imagery is amazing! This one in particular really caught my attention, and touched me. I could only hope to ever create something half as good as this. *salutes almighty poet* Beautiful, dahling. Keep at it!
| sara 3/30/04 . chapter 1
i thought that it was beautiful. i interpreted it in several different ways which made it unique and spectacular ;)
| Escapist 3/27/04 . chapter 1
I already told you how much I love this poem, but I thought I'd drop a review anyway, telling you how I'm basking in your amazing words. And ok, that was a little lame, but it's the truth.
| ladymaverick 3/26/04 . chapter 1
Disturbing. Unbelievable. Superb.
You did an awesome job with this...I like your choice of words
"Black cherry candy pavement"
"soft hair gleaming with impatience"
"lacey luscious lady birds sang out their seductions"
I like how it's not so straightforward...you actually have to think about it, process it.
You've got talent.
| twisted little secret 3/19/04 . chapter 1
this is an amazing piece, the imagery, the flow, the message. So powerful, the depth it has goes so far.
| ALK214 3/16/04 . chapter 1
Bianca... I remember reading the proto-poem of this! Very nice, you definitely sharped it up. I love line XII, "and the lacey luscious lady birds sang out their seductions..." That is what I call poetry. I still can't get over that you dumped rhymes, but I'm dealing with it...