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| guntherluvsme 2004-09-21 ch 1, | I thnk I'm seeing a pattern of the use of the word "succeed" It's verry good. I like this one very much. |
| SubliminalMsgs 2004-04-01 ch 1, | that was pretty good...i liked it...nice job! |
| XpapercutX15 2004-03-15 ch 1, | that was good the rhymes flowed well to |
| Aleonic Relic 2004-03-15 ch 1, | friends are a tricky thing. pick them carefully or you'll find a dagger in your back, hurts but the pain eventually subsides. good poem, it's well written. |