swet~SporT

Read this one online, and I still like it. Kinda sounds like u were on something when u wrote it, but awesome none the less.

literature wise-is pretty images "have the gaseous swirls envelop me"
psychology wise (or however you spell it)-since most writers are well...(I want to say "self centered" but without sounding snotty..oh well) so since most writers are marshmellows and I assume you're talking about your own little mushroom thing-it's spring! we all want to get out of here!

Not your best work, but still pretty good. I like the word fluttering; however, maybe it was overused in that one part?...