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Miss. Paradox 2008-06-25 ch 18,	abuseIn my wandering through fictionpress I found this story and I felt the need to tell you that I loved it. Of course, it's a little rough around the edges at times- some editing of words would help. But, what story isn't? So um ya, great job.
Fictatiousrambler 2008-04-25 ch 18,	abuseOh kawaii! I spent the last three days reading this and i have to say it was worth it! OMG i LOVED it, so sad it had to end.
JtheChosen1 2008-03-03 ch 18,	abuseAMAZING! I couldn't stop reading it!
D's Silly G 2008-03-03 ch 18,	abusebeautiful chapter and story i loved it! i was almost in tears when i thought Destin died at the end of i think it was chapter 15. the sad song i had on didn't help any let me tell you. the last chapter was very well done and i like that end bit between Val and Destin. it really made Val a real person and in turn made the whole story that much more real. i'm glad he has Benny. xox DSG
Rika Onienkai 2008-02-23 ch 18,	abuseGreat story! Look for odd words replacements.
Rika Onienkai 2008-02-21 ch 10,	abuseI'm really enjoying reading all of your material with Armand and Destin. I've found a couple of word replacements, this chapter has a sing instead of a sign. I found a few others earlier but the system was done and I couldn't let you know. Your flow is really pleasant to read. I'll let you know if I find errors--helpful I hope :)
Fork-In-Your-Eye 2008-01-08 ch 18,	abuseFirst off, i really have to say this, I'm AWED at the lengths of each chapter! You can really really write and write and write and there i was thinking, 18 chapters, i could finish it within two nights. In the end, I was like OMG I'M LATE FOR WORK AND I HAVENT FINISH THIS STINKING CHAPTER(its a figure of speech =P). Secondly, I FINALLY FINISHED READING IT AT 3.18 in the morning. Haha...^^ Great... I have no regrets. I love your story. It's really really good. I can't wait to reread it again, if i have time that is. ^^ Quite a number of errors and spelling mistakes here and there but what the heck. Thanks for the story!
moneymakestheworldgoround 2007-12-15 ch 18,	abuse*sheds tear that was just so sweet. ^_^ I LOVE IT! ^_^ i want to take destin and make him MINE. stuff his gayness... he was straight be4 ... muahahahha ... lol
moneymakestheworldgoround 2007-12-15 ch 7,	abuse:D this is like the first gay story i've read. and YEAH! WOOP WOOP! :) i dun usually read about gay pairings, but den i thought i'd give it a try, and TADA! heres an awesomely cute one!! ^_^ i love how destins so girly and innocent ... squeals anyway, i rly like this story, so thumbs up* ^_^
True.Randomness 2007-11-21 ch 18,	abuseOMG, this story was so beautiful. I cried, I laughed, I lived life through this story. I was really good. I mean it had the common problems that stories do, like sometimes the characters emotions and reactions seemed unlike the image they created, or some parts that didn't need much detail had to much or the ones that did need detail didn't. The was also a lot of puctuation errors and in the end some things were left unexplained. But even so, the plot of the story was wonderful, and the character development was magnificent. I loved how you made it so it was cleared that Val wasn't a bad person, but just lost, that was an amazing development. Your story was great. P.S: Your lemons were very well writen.
AnoMLoUs 2007-11-18 ch 7,	abuseOhnoes. I suppose I'm going to have to trust you. u_u I didn't see too much wrong with this chapter, though it did take a bit longer than the previous ones. (lol) Keep up the good work.
AnoMLoUs 2007-11-17 ch 6,	abuse>__>;; That was hot. XD Nice work. Again, there were a few grammer mistakes and some puncuational errors, but again they're very easily fixed. Nice job, overall!
AnoMLoUs 2007-11-17 ch 5,	abuseArugh. DX I need to go to bed, too. u_u Well, I'll read it tomorrow, when I can fully appreciate the hotness. I haven't seen any serious flaws, again, butI've spotted a few grammar errors and you may be over-using the ever-wonderful comma. Very simple to fix. ^-^ Keep up the good work.
AnoMLoUs 2007-11-16 ch 1,	abuseNice so far. I see no serious flaws, though more description on the characters looks would be nice. Other than that it's very well written.
Kalya 2007-10-22 ch 18,	abuseWow! I must say this is an extremly exciting story! Just wonderful. I actually cried when Destin was in the hospital, because Val nearly drowned him. beautiful story, really!! bye Kalya

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