Aw. I wanna slap Destin. SUCK IT UP!

But I don't think that's a really nice thing to do. I dunno. I like his story and his background, but I think he's a real **.

Aww. THis chapter was cute. Even though, well, Destin fell asleep by the rose bushes and everything.

One thing. I don't really like Armand that much. Eh. I like Destin a lot. He's nice and really down to earth. But Armand is almost, well, not.

I like to review every single thing I read, so behold my awesome skills.

I think this chapter went a bit deeper into their relationship, which is really good. Although it didn't get all sappy or smutty, it was nice. Almost platonic but not, right? Yeah.

When I read stories, I like to look for personality. You know? You have a really nice writing style. Everything is clear and concise. It doesn't have all those silly additives or random expletives to fill in space. But, I dunno, from this first chapter there isn't really too much personality. I can't really get a feel for the characters.

Gimme a long, long cinderella story with drama, angst, fluff, some (some!? xP) sex and I'm all over it.
Enjoyed this rollercoaster a great deal, thank you for sharing it!

HEY! i just wanted to tell you that I absolutely love this story!! I thought it was wondeful and you could connect with and understand all the characters!

I really liked Michael, Armand and Destin. I kinda actually really liked Val, too. I couldn't help but feel bad for him, and I'm really curious about his future, hinthint... Haha, anyways, maybe I'll check out the rewrite, although I just wanted to know if there any major changes and what you actually changed! Thank you, and have a nice day!

Much Love!

I believe this is one of my favorite stories ever!

I absolutetly love this story~! Since the first day I started reading it I was hooked o_0 It's very well written and as it progresses it keeps drawing you in. Great job! ^_^

I thought for the longest time while reading this story that it wouldn't have any real opposition in it and that it would basically revolve around love scenes (which I ended up skipping most of anyway) but I still couldn't stop reading it. Something just kept me at it and I'm glad I did. This was worth every minute I spent reading it. Truely, you did such a wonderful job building Armond's and Destin's relationship slow and real. Not many people have the patience to do that so good job. Also, you're characterization was simply stunning, from Destin, To Adam, to Val, everyone you wrote had such ...life in them. Again, wonderful job. And I must admit, I think my new quote is you're last one here "I spent my whole life finding heaven, and I found it in you" That made me cry and tied the title in nicely. I also liked how you added the angel endearment and how armand (oh, was I spelling his name wrong with whole time..whoops, sorry) was always saying how Destin was heaven truely this is a beautiful peice. thank you for writing it...and now I think I'm going to get some sleep since I've spent all day reading lol(seriously you write the longest chapters I've ever seen!)

First of all, I really enjoyed this story. The only thing that slightly bothered me was that the final chapter sort of scrambled my brains with all the new characters introduced. Also, I dunno if you fixed that in the revised version, but it was very annoying that you didn't mark the change of scenes. You should have at least leave a space or a sign or something.
At any rate, I loved the story - as you can see it goes to my favourites. I did find it odd that Destin forgave Val in the end. Personally, if smn had tried to rape me, murder me and had killed my dog (and I hated the dog killing part btw - I hate it when animals suffer), therefore seriously ** me up in the head, I wouldn't forgive him so easily. But overall, the minor grammar mistakes and the change of scenes thing aside, the story was great. I spent all my free time reading it several days in a row and it was time well spent.Great work!

iv just realised...lol allen and lincoln have there own story dont they? lol

xx

love it!

Wow. This story is fantastic. Watching the spelling in some places, but . . . yeah. Gods, I even added you to favourites, and that's SPECIAL. I only have 4 on favourites. You must be good.

This plot was excellent and the story was well written. Almost all characters were drawn out perfectly. Armand & destinw are really suited to each. They are a match made in heaven. Keep up the good work.

i just have finished your story and I really like it, especially the end because i don't like the characters being perfectly good or hopeless evil and with val you showed very good how he could became so cruel like he did. I only think that the scene in the hospital after the second attac was a bit too dramatic..- only a bit not much... you also had a few spelling mistakes but i know that with a story that long its hard to find them all ... oh and i found the lenght of the chapters were really good because often authers only have chapters which are 10-30 words long and i think thats boring ... and i think you wrote to much sex scenes which sometimes were a bit boring
all iin all i really like your story please write something like that again!!