Interesting start, but very short... Must read more!

whoa. awesome. just. awesome.

I don't know about Sven but i was definatly entranced by the spider, when the chapter ended I had t osnap out of the dark shady world that had come-up so beautifully in my minds eye back to the world of my computer and Keyboard. Only good stories do that and this one is definantly promising, I can't wait till you get done the next chapters as I am eager to read them. I really liked how you translated time while Sven was looking through the files and how you speak that its early morning and when he is done that its now past noon. It shows me he spent a large chunk of time trying to learn about Varius. The air the suroundings everything brings a world of life that I enjoy about the art of writing. You paint this picture beautifully for me so keep it up, write more!

>> *COUGH* You're writing makes me think of very dirteh things...>< *is now constipated*

Oh, I like! More! Now!
As for formatting, if you use Microsoft Word: format it the way you want it, then save the file as a Web Page.

its starting nicely but me want to see more

very, very nice start to what looks like is going to be an awesome story! keep writing!