YAY, VAMPS!

Wow, great poem. I like it.

'I was made to end you days'
I think it's meant to be 'your'. Only spelling error i picked up.
Also: I LOVE IT.
omg, what powerful words. I love how the rain...is just...there. Now, i have a couple of vampires poems, but would never have thought to do anything like this. It really makes it stand out - i saw the title, and read the summary. it seemed strange, what had rain to do with a vampire? So, I read it to find out...and wasn't disapointed. I love the last verse, and the last line especially. Really good wording, very powerful. You've certainly picked the right words for the poem, and I gotta give you a big cheers =)

beautifully written.

u were right that was an AWESOME (TIMES INFINITY TO THE INFINITIETH POWER) poem

This is dark and well written. It is brief, sharp and good.

I love vampires. Vampires are awesome. lol. Great poem!

i love the descriptions...Well done.

Very nice piece. It is well written.

Really good poem, I love it!