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| Frodo13 2005-04-27 ch 1,  | abuseawesome, simply awesome. =) keep up the great work. |
| JJR Meerraf 2004-05-28 ch 1, | abuseWOW! Definately brilliantly awesome! I never thought of it that way! I'm awestruck my friend! Seriously. Magnificent work! I must leave now, no more reviews for today (I've put off school long enough and soon I'll get caught) Wonderful job. I look forward to reading your work again soon! |
| sheZadey 2004-05-24 ch 1, | abusewow that was very mighty in 3 lines. it was strong and i think kinda cute. you know this little acorn that wants to be this huge tree. anyways i know its a general meaning but i think its kinda funny. i love it. : o) |
| Deadwind 2004-03-22 ch 1, | abuseAw, I dont' know if this is supposed to be cute, but it is! PS: When I read it, i see a chipmunck eating up that acorn! ^__^ |
| Mime 2004-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI definately know what you're talking about here. Short, and strong, what can I say but, "Awesome job!"? |
| A Beautiful Nightmare 2004-03-17 ch 1, | abuseYou write alot about dreaming big... yes, a writer should never lose inspiration... |
| Needa S 2004-03-17 ch 1, | abuseCool..Awesome job! |
| Kelpylion 2004-03-17 ch 1, | abuse*nose twitches* I smell oak sap rising from the ground...ah... This piece pulled up emotions and images almost magically; I had the image-feeling of a benign, entlike sorcerer raising his arms and tangled, wild brown-green roots and trunks and leaves bursting from the ground in a spurt of some kind of fantasy book power. *Re-reads review* Wow-definitely a successful haiku, if you can pull up all that, along with the basic message of possibility and dreaming big. |
| Miz E. Mak 2004-03-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was wicked tight...wow. I love it... acorns dreaming of forests; what a cool way to say what you were getting at. Keep writing. |
| Wasted Postage 2004-03-16 ch 1, | abusewow. You did a great job of personifying the acorn. Beautiful. ~*~AbunaiChikara |
| tigerlily 2004-03-16 ch 1, | abuse...I'm not speaking to you now. XD -TL, who has been amazingly out-done in haikus (not that was ever good at them in the first place). |
| obsidian katana 2004-03-16 ch 1, | abusewonderful haiku. simple, but a good message. nice work! |
| Children of the Root 2004-03-16 ch 1, | abuseI like, beany!! Its cute. Reminds me of that song about the ant that wanted to move a rubber tree plant. "Just what makes that little ol' ant Think he'll move that rubber tree plant Anyone knows an ant, can't Move a rubber tree plant But he's got high hopes... he's got high hopes" |
| shihan tito 2004-03-16 ch 1, | abuse...I dream of mushy bananas...and tract housing. |
| admiresher 2004-03-16 ch 1, | abuseI like this little poem it's sweet and short. It may be deeper than i thought. Thanks, Hope to see more of your writing. |