This was a really well written piece. It was an interesting take on a subject that is often written about these days by people who don't really know what it's like. You seemed to really know what it's like. I liked the way the last line of the two sections tied them both together. That worked really well.

this is amazing! i've read most of your stuff and i intend to read it all. Your style of writing is so diffrent to others and addictive. Keep writing and i'll keep writing reveiws :P x

's all I can ...brilliant.

wow. short and powerful. the second makes me feel like it is ana who killed the girl. very interesting. good idea.

wow! that was really good! i also loved how it was written in the "you" POV thing..i forget what that is called but that is a hard to do but you did it very well..than you wrote in third person and did that perfectly as well...awsome job! keep writing!