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Reviews For: Inner Child

Frostany 2007-10-14 ch 1,	This was a really well written piece. It was an interesting take on a subject that is often written about these days by people who don't really know what it's like. You seemed to really know what it's like. I liked the way the last line of the two sections tied them both together. That worked really well.
Alex 2006-08-30 ch 1,	this is amazing! i've read most of your stuff and i intend to read it all. Your style of writing is so diffrent to others and addictive. Keep writing and i'll keep writing reveiws :P x
paper dolls 2006-02-18 ch 1,	Brilliant.That's all I can say.Just...brilliant.
ezyret 2004-06-05 ch 1,	wow. short and powerful. the second makes me feel like it is ana who killed the girl. very interesting. good idea.
Pineapple River 2004-03-16 ch 1,	wow! that was really good! i also loved how it was written in the "you" POV thing..i forget what that is called but that is a hard to do but you did it very well..than you wrote in third person and did that perfectly as well...awsome job! keep writing!