I really liked your story! It was detailed and well written.

I thought that it was a very good first atempt at a romance story. The only complaint I have is it was a little choppy at times, but most 1st attempts at differents genres are. So good job! and if you could please review my story called The Academy I would very much appreciate it!

i only read 1/4 of the story, but it sounds kind of weak. just a bunch of kids standing around randomly saying things. i don't mean to be mean. but its missing something. sort of a catch, something to pull the reader in and keep them reading and involved in the story. i do like the " canada man". its cute

Aw, this is cool - I love the whole comic book theme and the ending is great! Good work and thanks for the review on my fic! :)

Interesting...keep up with the good work! And thanks for reviewing my story!
-AthensAngel

I loved the ending. Kissing is so romantic.

I must say that was a good story. Relationships are so "magnificent," and you surley did fufill that theme!

I liked this sort of reminded me of something i was going through...wish it would turn out the same as it did in the story!

aw this is so cute!! are you going to continue it? cuz i think you should itd be so awesome! R/R my stuff if you ever have the chance ^_~
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