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| black*tears*of*innocence 2005-07-18 ch 1,   | wow, i really liked this poem!! i loved the flow and the rhym and i loved the whole idea of it. great job and keep writing.~davida |
| Petronia H 2005-01-02 ch 1, | This is a good one... But the rhyming sounded a little forced. Don't feel like poetry always has to rhyme. Just write. Otherwise it was very good :) |
| Amelia Carr 2004-12-31 ch 1, | great work! and it's really true, too...thanks for reviewing my poem :) |
| Catsupracus 2004-03-18 ch 1, | Change is coming with each breath- I really liked this line!! Great job ^-^ |
| Trinka 2004-03-18 ch 1, | That's a good poem, i like it! |
| My Mental Disaster 2004-03-18 ch 1, | Wow...Thats really good...i like the format |
| OcToBeR rUsT 2004-03-17 ch 1, | i hate change. this is a good poem too, i relate well |
| BlackOleander 2004-03-16 ch 1, | Hey, This is a great poem!! The last line makes you think, and you realize that change is the only thing that stays the same... Nice work! |
| theworldisround 2004-03-16 ch 1, | I love how you took something that people say a lot (change is constant) and made it into a well written poem. good work. (thanks for reviewing my last poem) |